Lots of good touches here. Good help statements and straight-forward items. I was concerned about grammar faults (possessive apostrophes are missing, for instance); that you used rap and hip-hop interchangeably in some items, not in others; that you did not number items; and that you didn't make your overall purpose clear until the final item.
Chris:
ReplyDeleteLots of good touches here. Good help statements and straight-forward items. I was concerned about grammar faults (possessive apostrophes are missing, for instance); that you used rap and hip-hop interchangeably in some items, not in others; that you did not number items; and that you didn't make your overall purpose clear until the final item.